Hey ,

By the time you are done reading this email…

You should get the whole idea of how to suck people into your post or copy..

You should have learnt how to make sure people keep reading your post from the first line easily to the end…

But in just a minute, I need to tell you something I found amusing and interesting…

So yesterday,  I was scrolling Twitter when I couldn’t work because of various things…

I came across someone very important and good..

He’s a copywriter that has built a $700M business under 6 years…

Damn… That’s freaking huge..

He has a course called the RMBC and I decided to check it out…

I checked it and the course was $997…

I know I don’t have the money lying around but something spectacular came up…

And it was the fact that I read the sales copy word for word for over 3 hours…

I kept reading it again and again because this copy is very good..

Very good is an understatement… The copy is pocket draining mehn…

And so? Why are you telling me this?

Okay… Take a chill pill …

From the beginning of the letter, I was sucked in…

It wasn’t boring and I never took my eyes off it for a second…

And after analyzing the copy, I observed something I want to tell you…

And that is what I promised to show you from the beginning..

But before then… When writing copy or post or anything you want people to read…

There’s something we call lead..

And this is simply the first 100 to 300 to 800 words on your copy or post…

It might include your headline too..

And this is exactly what suck your readers in to keep reading…

Don’t forget they can dump your post and go watch Taooma on YouTube or Instagram (I love that girl)..

So Needless to say you need to make the best out of your lead…

And so…

I want to put into your hands the hack to write leads that suck people into your copy or post without scrolling away…

We have 6 different types of way to write out the lead of your copy…

But today, I will be mentioning just one with 2 or more example…

So one way to write copy is to…

Start by making a BIG promise of transformation..

Find examples below:

Dear Friend, 

Today I am going to show you the fool-proof marketing system that has generated over 10M in pure profits for me and my clients just under 30 days..

And in a minute, I will be showing you how to lay your hands on this foolproof marketing system..

But before that… bla bla bla

Example 2:

Dear whatsapp seller,

In the next few minutes, I will be putting in your hands a very big darn secret that has generated over 15M in sales for me on whatsapp only…

And this big darn secret is used to sell both digital and physical products because I do both…

And the best part is that you are getting it for FREE..

And if all goes well, you will be walking away with a lot of bonuses all for FREE too..

Let me quickly show you how to get that..

Bla bla bla bla..

Hope you get the point?

Exactly!!!

That’s how sweet it can be…

Thanks for reading too…

Have a nice day ahead,

Dolapo Hamzat. 

P.S:

Maybe when I am in a good mood, I will tell you the other five ways…

Or I should probably tell my inner circle guys..

And that reminds me…

If you sell anything online… either physical or digital products..

This is for you…

I know you want to make more sales and attract more paying customers..

I also know how hard it can be waking up with no point or idea of how you will get new customers and sales..

And that my friend,  is disheartening..

And in lieu of that…

I am holding a 2 days live class to teach you all you need to know about

Getting customers…

Making sales…

Closing sales….

Following up….

Etc…

And you will be getting a 30 days mentorship program with me where i get to look into your business and show you ways to make more money…

You will also be getting my business bundle worth N5,000 for FREE..

And this 2 day live class is going for just N5,000 only…

It will be holding on Zoom starting 15th February and you get the replay link immediately…

You should reply this email to pay now..

Mind you, it’s your total choice to either decide to change your business story ..

Or you continue the way you are..

Either is fine.

But if you feel you don’t like your business the way it is right now… 

Reply this email to get account details and pay now..